Jawarag... nebeshtaank e nouken silsilah (By Noor Jamal) (awali bahar)

[Zahida Raees Raji]

جورگ ۔ نور جمال ءِ نبشتانکانی نوکیں در ۔ اولی بہر

[Zahida Raees Raji]

جورگ ۔ نور جمال ءِ نبشتانکانی نوکیں در ۔ اولی بہر






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[ضیا بلوچ Zia Baloch]

vaajaheN braat Noor Jamaal Jaan, salaam o vaahag

manaa shume "jawaRag" sak baaz sot bet ! man vatii o kulleN deevaan e neemg a shume minna varaaH k shumaa chusheN seet-rasaanii nibeshtaaNkii maaraa baKhshaatag !
ee peemeN nibeshtaaNk aanii vaanag o zaanag a may zaant e tooka sak baaz geshii ket !
man hamii ummeeta daraaN k shumaa deeem tira ham pa maa chusheN nebishtaaNk dem daye !

jadeed shaai'rii e naama ,tashbeeh (= simile),ist’eaaraa (=metaphor) ,alaamaat (signs/signatures)
hamaa vaRaa kaarmarz buvagaa ant k mardum vati savaasaN sar a bekant o betachet ! 
cha "aapuseN loojar" o "buzaanii jaalig e dishtaar" a che ee cheez cho aadeNka saaf ent !

man ham chusheN baazeN cheezi jooRentag ! shumaa ham allama vantag ant ! ba-har-haal ee silisla jaarii ent ! baareN taa kujaa sar bet !!

shume baaz baaz minnat vaaraaN !

 
 

Zia Baloch

[manzil]

baz washe nebshtanke noor kamal e (jodag)
      mani deema gwastage wahda yak nibeshanke gwast ki bazeen mardoma hame nibeshnke sara wati wati lekh darshan kotagetan ki (ma parcha nibesh kan,een) tah ma hame jedageye taha kapee ta hame jedag e taha nebishtah kanag e hamal e bendant beet ma aga wati gwasta bechaare wati raj daptara bopoleen guda mara bazeen kesah o dastan deema kaitee ,chakar o gwaram e 30 sale jang ,hani shay mureed e eshki dastan,,hamal e jang go paranga o diagh bazeen ,,ya ma wati marchigeen chageran bechareen ta ma nibeshta kanokee guda hama kalam mara wat nebishta kange sekeena dant ki nibeshtha bekan,,
           izmkarani angat kadam zindagan .                                                                   
       murtageen ma agan mai kalam zendagan
ya hama chagerdani taha man o tuo haroch wad wadeen karest gindee ..
 shome wahagani hamsafar ,,Manzil

[QasuM,FaraZ]

Waja en noor jamal tai nebeshtank want shok at , balay kame kasan at ,man chonkay wath ek baaskian o mani nam ham tai shoken nebeshtank e taha hawar ent o man aeshia pa watha shraf e sarpad ban ..............nu chon k ek discusion k bungeej ent bahad ent dema broth ..............awal wa esh ent k man ada kassa depend kanag a nahoon ,wati jenda ham inan.....Balay bia k ae selsala . k shuma aeshia Jadeed shaeri goshay ya bakol e Zia (ada man waja Zia e radi ey rast kanag lotan  k alaamat e English sign ya signature na ent balkeen Symbol ent )jadeed shaai'rii e naama ,tashbeeh (= simile),ist’eaaraa (=metaphor) ,alaamaat (signs/signatures)
hamaa vaRaa kaarmarz buvagaa ant k mardum vati savaasaN sar a bekant o betachet !  aadeNka saaf ent"" ! ......................ae shaheri cha kuja bendat beth? shumay taha chencho mardum a Akber Barakzai wantag????? Malik toki wantag??????? man pak jazmman k kassa!!! parcha k shuma ae bwanteenan guda shuma ae list e taha  ae hardoen wajahani nam hawar geetkag atan parcha aeshani shaheri hame rangeen besar o padeen harfan cha pur ant ......... nu harz esh en k ae mazmoon dobara a nebeshta kanag bebet o ha  ham Akber Barakzai e ROCHA K KOSHT KANT? a k waja e kitab nam ent, wanaga rand  ......ya malik toki e.......................... ae hardo wajan abaid dega mazneen shaheria ham ae kar kotag k gaishteren mardomani favourite ent Waja Mubarek Qazi e nazm "Kashankove"" ham hame hawala datagen nazmani taha hawar kanag bet ya Aushter e peryat kant parcha k ae hardoen nazmani taha ae rangeen gal karmared botagan" Qazi wati nazm kalashankove e taha nbeshta kant ........."mani pet tu aga drmulki bazaraan raway balkeen dila bejeed e k wati chok e wasta che begeran , Radio e , Rado gadyal e....suter e balay ae rand e tai chok a kashankove e kar ent " ae nazma " Radio , Rado ,soter  . ech labz balochi na ean aeshia cho kany??????????? ya shuma ae sarpad be chonkay Qazia nebeshta kotag ae wasta zaroor shar bet?

[Noor Jamal]

Qasum jan , tai minna war k tau,wati hayal darshaan kutag ant,o aayouki bahra qazi o, barakzai a nazma ham dayan..o wanokan sarpad ham kna, k jwarag kujam nazm o shair ya nebeshtaank ant,

Noor Jamal Baloch

[Kamber Mubarak]

Dege nazanan ble ay mardumani ke tho mesaal datagan...ishani taha qasum o asif dowain noke naman ble dowainan dari labzanke o balochi labzanke sarpden wanok an....labzank nukain dar bojeet.agan qasum o asif ha nukain dar e pach kotag..ya kohnen dar e nok kotag Mayaari nayan..labzank wat yak darya e..1 o 2 mardumani waheshani pad ha nayen..o ida judge bayed mabith ke faisla bedanth ke che shar o che harab..watee watee leika banth..watee negah banth..qasum ha agan Zindagi Post Box e Taha kotag o wadar ha en...Mayaarbaar nayen..Nukain Mail e..Nukain Chehdag an...Agan balochi labzank e jagah daat kanth dema roath..agan na soonsan darya Lepag Kanth..agan nukain tahre dema kaith ay pa balochi labzanka Harabi e nabith...Nukain Safar e bith...O ay Safar e rah Dema Barag Bibith..darad Mabith..Minnatwaar...(Noor Jamal tayee gushage pad ha amencho gusht kotag)

[Kamber Mubarak]

qasum qalam o kaarch e Taha bayed tapawat e bibith...akbar barakzai o malek taugi baqi en marduman am allam wantagan...hahahaha